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As per request, I'm here dropping some feedback :)
I will critique 5 aspects of the piece and give
a half, whole, or no star depending on what I think of thought of that area.

So, for the character design itself, I'd give you a whole star.
They have a nice amount of detail without it being over complicated, which is great.
I don't see any areas that look too "busy",
or like they are there just because.

For the pose I give a half star.
It looks interesting, but it's kind of hard to read. Certain areas leave me a bit confused as to what's going on, like where her right arm goes to. Also, I assume she's sitting on the end of a hand rail? If so, her legs look like they are positioned a bit wonky to me.

For the composition I'd give a half star.
I can tell what's going on, but it doesn't read very well for me . Especially at the lower part of the image where things seem a little cluttered.

On your shading I'd give a half star.
It looks good in some areas, but in others it seems a little spotty. I enjoy the way you shaded the hair for example, but the shirt and legs don't seem to have received the same care.

For visibility I'll have to give a half star.
The second one looks a lot easier to see, but the initial one is pretty dark and hard to see.

Waterina responds:

Oh thank you for feedback

Btw im not the one who shaded the hair. My classmate want to shade the hair so I gave it to them

I would 100% play this if it were real lol

ScepterDPinoy responds:

Me too.

I'm here wishing Newgrounds had proper notifications so
I didn't miss out on art, but that aside, I love how you've
been making neater backgrounds as time goes on.
Especially at that perspective. Those are hard and I avoid them lol

Finasty responds:

I did got a notifications, it's just wont show up on the Gmails lol

Edit: Yeah, i've been focusing on making background, but somehow still lack of coloring it

Amazing job on all of these!!

TheShokBlok responds:

Tysm! ╰⁠(⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠´⁠꒳⁠`⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠)⁠╯

A beautiful sword!
Did you do the artwork only, or also the
design?

MrDoth responds:

Thank you!!!!! In most cases I also make the design :)

Awesome

aSmartBoi responds:

Thanks ^^

Pick a card, any card~

Finasty responds:

I pick 7

You went nuts on this shading bro, thanks for
sharing the link!

24HoursSleeping responds:

Thank you! It was a really fun experiment, a lot different from my normal stuff.

Looks stupid pretty.
I wonder why Nintendo has never remade this one...
(The BS games don't count)

IllusionOfMana responds:

Probably no wish to, Zelda 1 is very simple so making something compelling today from it would be just as much work as making a full brand new adventure.
Ive thought about creating a vertical slice and submitting it... But Nintendo tends to want two things from stuff like this, mainly a reinventing or introduction of innovative modern mechanics... The other is credibility and though I know a few big indies in the industry... That's not enough for Nintendo to trust my team and I can handle their IP properly.

Really love what you did with the piece
You have a very nice coloring style ~

MercKaiju responds:

Thank you! I've been working on improving my coloring for a while now. I'm happy to know it looks nice!

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