Yooo happy belated birthday dude!
You are getting better and better with your poses :)
(I seriously wish we got decent notifications on here)
Yooo happy belated birthday dude!
You are getting better and better with your poses :)
(I seriously wish we got decent notifications on here)
You're 10 days late lol
As per request, I'm here dropping some feedback :)
I will critique 5 aspects of the piece and give
a half, whole, or no star depending on what I think of thought of that area.
So, for the character design itself, I'd give you a whole star.
They have a nice amount of detail without it being over complicated, which is great.
I don't see any areas that look too "busy",
or like they are there just because.
For the pose I give a half star.
It looks interesting, but it's kind of hard to read. Certain areas leave me a bit confused as to what's going on, like where her right arm goes to. Also, I assume she's sitting on the end of a hand rail? If so, her legs look like they are positioned a bit wonky to me.
For the composition I'd give a half star.
I can tell what's going on, but it doesn't read very well for me . Especially at the lower part of the image where things seem a little cluttered.
On your shading I'd give a half star.
It looks good in some areas, but in others it seems a little spotty. I enjoy the way you shaded the hair for example, but the shirt and legs don't seem to have received the same care.
For visibility I'll have to give a half star.
The second one looks a lot easier to see, but the initial one is pretty dark and hard to see.
Oh thank you for feedback
Btw im not the one who shaded the hair. My classmate want to shade the hair so I gave it to them
I would 100% play this if it were real lol
Me too.
Tysm for drawing her!
She looks so amazing and vibrant in your style!
:D
And I'm happy to support your awesome art!
Her name is Artie if you were curious
:3
I'm here wishing Newgrounds had proper notifications so
I didn't miss out on art, but that aside, I love how you've
been making neater backgrounds as time goes on.
Especially at that perspective. Those are hard and I avoid them lol
I did got a notifications, it's just wont show up on the Gmails lol
Edit: Yeah, i've been focusing on making background, but somehow still lack of coloring it
Midna is not a monster, she's an imp!
:(
Nice work!
Amazing job on all of these!!
Tysm! ╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯
Blast 'em up!
He's.... Right behind me isn't he?
A beautiful sword!
Did you do the artwork only, or also the
design?
Thank you!!!!! In most cases I also make the design :)
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