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Your character designs are so rad

Please tell me this was the fake X

Yooo happy belated birthday dude!
You are getting better and better with your poses :)
(I seriously wish we got decent notifications on here)

Finasty responds:

You're 10 days late lol

As per request, I'm here dropping some feedback :)
I will critique 5 aspects of the piece and give
a half, whole, or no star depending on what I think of thought of that area.

So, for the character design itself, I'd give you a whole star.
They have a nice amount of detail without it being over complicated, which is great.
I don't see any areas that look too "busy",
or like they are there just because.

For the pose I give a half star.
It looks interesting, but it's kind of hard to read. Certain areas leave me a bit confused as to what's going on, like where her right arm goes to. Also, I assume she's sitting on the end of a hand rail? If so, her legs look like they are positioned a bit wonky to me.

For the composition I'd give a half star.
I can tell what's going on, but it doesn't read very well for me . Especially at the lower part of the image where things seem a little cluttered.

On your shading I'd give a half star.
It looks good in some areas, but in others it seems a little spotty. I enjoy the way you shaded the hair for example, but the shirt and legs don't seem to have received the same care.

For visibility I'll have to give a half star.
The second one looks a lot easier to see, but the initial one is pretty dark and hard to see.

Waterina responds:

Oh thank you for feedback

Btw im not the one who shaded the hair. My classmate want to shade the hair so I gave it to them

I would 100% play this if it were real lol

ScepterDPinoy responds:

Me too.

Tysm for drawing her!
She looks so amazing and vibrant in your style!
:D
And I'm happy to support your awesome art!

Her name is Artie if you were curious
:3

I'm here wishing Newgrounds had proper notifications so
I didn't miss out on art, but that aside, I love how you've
been making neater backgrounds as time goes on.
Especially at that perspective. Those are hard and I avoid them lol

Finasty responds:

I did got a notifications, it's just wont show up on the Gmails lol

Edit: Yeah, i've been focusing on making background, but somehow still lack of coloring it

Midna is not a monster, she's an imp!
:(
Nice work!

Amazing job on all of these!!

TheShokBlok responds:

Tysm! ╰⁠(⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠´⁠꒳⁠`⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠⸝⁠)⁠╯

Blast 'em up!

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